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Offline Voodoo Child

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"The Still-Life"
« on: January 16, 2009, 03:26 AM »
In this poem, I merged my two passions.. art and poetry.. I hope you enjoy

~Voo

"The Still-Life"

The Still-Life

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Offline Allen

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Re: "The Still-Life"
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2009, 10:52 PM »
Cookie ~ You are getting really good at this.  I just love the way you merge, sublimely, the three elements:  Words, music, and image.  None of the senses conflict in this work, infact, they play off of each other very well.
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Re: "The Still-Life"
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2009, 11:36 PM »
WOW! And that's all I have to say about that. G.
I believe in making the world safe for our children, but not for our children's children, because I don't think children should be having sex.

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Re: "The Still-Life"
« Reply #3 on: January 17, 2009, 06:27 AM »
Allen.. thanks again for your very kind words!

G... I appreciate your Wow! Thanks for viewing.

xx Cookie
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"A dream you dream alone is only a dream. A dream you dream together is reality." John Lennon