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Poetic AX Poetry Workshops - Polish That Poem - Come On In => The Poetic AX ~ Sharp Critique => Topic started by: elise on November 07, 2004, 11:08 PM

Title: The Weaver
Post by: elise on November 07, 2004, 11:08 PM
The Weaver

Ever diligent at His loom
A tapestry He weaves
He does not focus on the threads
But the tapestry to be.

Adding a silver thread of talent
Or maybe two or three
Each tapestry is different
Each beautiful to see.

The Purple threads of compassion
All in different hues
And varying degrees of wisdom
In shades of green and blue.

The reds are threads of courage
From vivid tones to pale
The whites are strength and valor
Pulled taut to tell the tale.

The gray threads speak of trials bleak
And the blacker threads are loss
When more strength is needed
Round the white ones these emboss.

Past the darkest threads transcend
The yellow threads of joy
Interwoven with family and friends
Their brightness does employ.

Back and forth the shuttle flies
Interweaving strands of gold
As wonderfully and magically
The tapestry unfolds.

The perfect golden threads of love
Hold a mystery tis true
Each single one that is given away
Is soon replaced by two.

We cannot know how fine will be
The fabric that He weaves
He does not focus on the threads
But the tapestry to be.




Title: The Weaver
Post by: witt on November 08, 2004, 05:12 AM
Ah, this is marvelous. I wouldn't change a thing. I just love it.
One tiny thing--   'tis
Title: The Weaver
Post by: Lady SunShine on November 08, 2004, 08:52 AM
WOW I love this one sis perfect
Title: The Weaver
Post by: Wordweaver on November 08, 2004, 09:27 AM
But we do know how fine a fabric of poetry you weave,
in fact it is just outstanding. You have come a long way
pilgrim!
Title: The Weaver
Post by: elise on November 08, 2004, 10:39 AM
WOW, thank you all so much for the kind words!  
Witt, I willl change "tis" to "'tis"...is that what you mean?   Thank you for such sweet words Witt, Sunny and Weave!
  :rose:
Title: The Weaver
Post by: Lady SunShine on November 08, 2004, 01:42 PM
u just need to add the ' to it ....................... ..'tis
Title: The Weaver
Post by: elise on November 08, 2004, 03:15 PM
OOPSY, thats what I meant!  hee hee..."tis" to " 'tis"
Title: Re: The Weaver
Post by: Halo on April 15, 2018, 04:22 AM
Beautiful poetry, elise! This deserves a bump.


The Weaver

Ever diligent at His loom
A tapestry He weaves
He does not focus on the threads
But the tapestry to be.

Adding a silver thread of talent
Or maybe two or three
Each tapestry is different
Each beautiful to see.

The Purple threads of compassion
All in different hues
And varying degrees of wisdom
In shades of green and blue.

The reds are threads of courage
From vivid tones to pale
The whites are strength and valor
Pulled taut to tell the tale.

The gray threads speak of trials bleak
And the blacker threads are loss
When more strength is needed
Round the white ones these emboss.

Past the darkest threads transcend
The yellow threads of joy
Interwoven with family and friends
Their brightness does employ.

Back and forth the shuttle flies
Interweaving strands of gold
As wonderfully and magically
The tapestry unfolds.

The perfect golden threads of love
Hold a mystery tis true
Each single one that is given away
Is soon replaced by two.

We cannot know how fine will be
The fabric that He weaves
He does not focus on the threads
But the tapestry to be.



Title: Re: The Weaver
Post by: RedemptionCentr on April 18, 2018, 08:16 PM
Halo, thank you for diving for this numinous pearl. I can tell the work that went into this, Elise.
Title: Re: The Weaver
Post by: elise on April 25, 2018, 06:45 PM
WOW thank you halo for this honor!  Thank you also RC....smiles