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Title: Broken
Post by: daisyxo on April 03, 2010, 12:00 AM
His ...
  passion faded
  warmth replaced
  distance invades
  emotions erased.

Her ...
  heart destroyed
  sadness reigns
  unwanted void
  emotional pains.

Now ...
   Irretrievably broken
   vows unbound
   circular tokens
   sorrows drowned.

Title: Re: Broken
Post by: elise on April 03, 2010, 01:34 AM
daisy sis, so happy to see you writing..it can be SUCH a healer, and a way of getting your feelings out.   Very well said.  And yes, it will take time.

forgiveness takes awhile, but trust me when I say it will free you when you can forgive.  It will do nothing for him, and wonders for you.
Hugs you tight~
Title: Re: Broken
Post by: daisyxo on April 03, 2010, 12:53 PM
hey sis :-)  yes, I'm finding the writing very therapeutic right now ... and I can even read some of the things others are writing.  For quite some time I've had writers (and readers) block.  I would start reading, wanting to read, and within a few lines my mind would lock it out, and I couldn't finish.  It was very frustrating.  I'm happy to say that even though the block is still there now and then, I'm beginning to break free of that.  Words that have been roaming around inside my head have been finding themselves a little less jumbled when they come out on paper.  I will be fine ... for the most part, I am fine, even now.  I've always been a very forgiving person, so I'm not worried about that.  I've been told I'm too forgiving at times.  As far as needing more time ... yep, but, I'm ok with that.  You are a dear friend, thanks, I'm so glad you're here.

hugsssss sis

 :poet :poet
Title: Re: Broken
Post by: Wordweaver on April 03, 2010, 03:10 PM
It is grand to see you writing daisy and only time and the mind can heal such a blow.  One cannot pretend to know how you feel because each circumstance is unique.  However, as friends we can offer all the support we can muster and help in your journey. Hugs weave
Title: Re: Broken
Post by: daisyxo on April 03, 2010, 11:21 PM
thanks Weave, I appreciate that.  It's great to have you as a friend.  hugssss :)
Title: Re: Broken
Post by: witt on April 04, 2010, 12:46 PM
Been there, as they say.

Joy will find you when you aren't looking.
Title: Re: Broken
Post by: daisyxo on April 05, 2010, 03:00 AM
Witt, thanks for stopping by ...... and I'm sorry that you've been there.  Hope things are better.