Tin Roof Alley Poets

Poet's Top Floor Balcony - Poetry Showcase - Your Comments Encouraged => Genuine Alley Poetry and Prose => Topic started by: Spurs And Stetson on November 18, 2019, 07:51 PM

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Post by: Spurs And Stetson on November 18, 2019, 07:51 PM
so suffered you with the unrestrained me
uncontrolled me
the me that sends running others

so burns the star
sol we see
souls are we

so sought you i
brought you to me
we

long have I loved, and
longed your fair skin
kissed by the sun
run the tall grass

bring you i
the bluebells
string hazel
kiss you finespun

i want you
as the Spring does
blossomed flower

-Christopher Todd Dallas
November 18, 2019
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Post by: daisyxo on November 19, 2019, 03:07 AM
Love this ... your writing style is unique and refreshing.
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Post by: elise on November 23, 2019, 11:51 AM
I enjoyed your own reversal of modifiers!  In a few places I thought of Master Yoda lamenting the loss of his mate. 
This was a fun yet tender read... Love it!  Well done! Clever you are!
 :rose
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Post by: Wordweaver on December 31, 2019, 01:10 PM
i want you
as the Spring does
blossomed flower

That is hard to beat and one I would be proud to have fathered.
Great write.
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Post by: Angel Of Incidence on January 28, 2020, 06:54 PM
A very unique style that makes me think all the way through. I enjoyed this!!!
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Post by: A-FRIEND on February 03, 2020, 12:06 AM
Welcome Sir.
Enjoyed your write