Tin Roof Alley Poets

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Title: nights
Post by: Halo on November 18, 2017, 03:33 AM
Racing towards dawn
my red rimmed eyes
squint against
the oncoming light
nerves jangled
from lack of sleep -
not lack of thought.

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Title: Re: nights
Post by: daisyxo on November 19, 2017, 11:22 AM
The day following is usually miserable,  too.  If this is what's going on for you, I hope it doesn't last long.
Title: Re: nights
Post by: Wordweaver on November 22, 2017, 04:06 PM
Halo, another short jab that has knockout potential I like it a lot.

Just me and you a dog named Boo.
Title: Re: nights
Post by: Halo on December 25, 2017, 04:33 AM


Thanks so much Weave, much appreciated! :)