Tin Roof Alley Poets

Poet's Top Floor Balcony - Poetry Showcase - Your Comments Encouraged => Minimalist Poetry & Micropoetry ~ For The Visual Short Muse => Topic started by: LorriS on March 12, 2013, 04:00 PM

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Post by: LorriS on March 12, 2013, 04:00 PM
She sits,
Sentry.
Still.
Staring.
Seeing sadness.

Seeming stoic.
Silently shrieking!
Systematically
Shattering.

(I wrote this while sitting in the hospital with my daughter)
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Post by: Halo on March 20, 2013, 09:44 AM
Hi LorriS,

There is power in your words. A Staccato punch!