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Offline daisyxo

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Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« on: February 20, 2007, 09:13 PM »
These are what I like to call ... Whispered Thoughts ... those things you create mostly in your mind and eventually they make it to paper, but they're short, and at times they seem unfinished.  They may not be perfect, but who has perfect thoughts all the time? 

Feel free to share your whispered thoughts with me ...


If I whisper my thoughts into a seashell
will my words spill forth when placed to your ear?

 :rose

I whispered thoughts of love to thee
into a seashell, and tossed it to the sea
it carries a wish that you'll come back to me
I'll wait for a while before setting you free
but before I do, hear this one last plea
my heart forever, belongs to thee......

 :rose

Drifting slowly with the wind
Ripples of time wear against my heart
and the tide of loneliness emerges.....

 :rose

She Cries

From deep down inside
comes love she can't hide,
her eyes
frequently confide
a heart swelled with pride,
deep sighs
as arms open wide
and their smiles collide;
she cries

 :rose

Tears

Tracing
the lines on my
cheeks, the nectar streams from
my eyes, landing upon a heart
that is broken - tears sent to mend
and cleanse my soul with love
my breaking heart
beats on

 :rose

Instrument of Perfection

Finely polished
and tuned
sleek and elegant
as the bow glides
feel the vibrations
through the strings
into your neck
and fingers
current
flowing
downward
to the tips
of your toes
transforming
your feelings
into visions
visions
into words
as the instrument
of perfection
unleashes
your mind
allowing you
to become one
with the poetry
of your soul.

 :rose

Shoreline bathed in foam
waves rearrange sand and shells
lazy summer days

 :rose

Darkness brought a chill,
shadows enveloped,
and I was overcome
with thoughts of the past,
visions of unfulfilled dreams
sorrow, loneliness -
and restless sleep.

 :rose
~ Marsha ~
 

"Abilities wither under faultfinding, blossom with encouragement." -- Donald A. Laird

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Re: Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« Reply #1 on: February 20, 2007, 09:16 PM »
Daisy, my dear,
Your Whispered Thoughts are lovely!
The imagery is beautiful.... aaahhhhhh....

Sincerely,
Cookie
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Re: Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« Reply #2 on: February 21, 2007, 05:51 PM »
thanks Cookie, glad you enjoyed them :)
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Re: Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« Reply #3 on: February 22, 2007, 12:24 AM »
your "thoughts" transport me daisy...awesome!   :rose
I felt it shelter to speak to you  ~Emily Dickinson

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Re: Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« Reply #4 on: February 23, 2007, 03:06 PM »
Happy to transport you, elise :)  thanks for stopping by ... and please feel free to share your musings, or whispered thoughts.
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Re: Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« Reply #5 on: February 23, 2007, 03:10 PM »
here are a couple 2 lines synonym poems that I wrote one day when I was just musing around ...

Cozy
soft, cushy, relaxing, comfortable
snuggling with a loved one is always pleasurable

Blanket
denali fleece, wool throws, chenille
security and warmth is what you'll feel
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Re: Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« Reply #6 on: March 09, 2007, 02:26 PM »
Silenced

Silence can bring you peace of mind
It gives you time to think things through
Let your thoughts flow free yet still refined
Embrace the quiet times for you
Never let your thoughts be too unkind
Cleansing your soul will help you renew
Escape into quiet and peace of mind
Discover what silence can do for you.

 :rose

Sense Poem

Ribbons and bows
childhood innocence
songs and giggles
peek-a-boo hands
precious kisses
God's gift of love

 :rose

Pool of Blue

My body is the cloud
stretched out
in a pool of blue sky
your fingertips
are the rays of the sun
reaching out
stretching to caress
every inch of my body
with your heat
your longing, desire
caress my skin and mold me
invite the breeze to cool
so that I may continue
to be reheated
by your fingertips
while I swim
in the pool of blue
and become lost
in the rays of the sun

 :rose
~ Marsha ~
 

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Re: Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« Reply #7 on: December 16, 2007, 05:50 PM »
Bound by Your Love

In your absence
I dream of drowning
in a pool of darkness,
drifting, suspended in time.

Content with your promise
of happily ever-after
'till death do us part.
I am forever yours.

Faithful to the end
I'll await your return,
in this dream-like trance,
bound by your love.

 :rose

People pass by with eyes cast downward,
neglecting promises, and dreams that have shattered.
Spilling to the pavement, each day they march forward -
people pass by with eyes cast downward.
Holding onto the past, they seek the right words
to replace the emptiness, to comfort the battered.
People pass by with eyes cast downward,
neglecting promises, and dreams that have shattered.

 :rose

white caps
on the water
shells buried in the sand
seagulls gliding hover in flight
peaceful

 :rose

Forgotten Treasures

O' those forgotten treasures from days of old
found hidden beneath the silver and gold
journals she had written from way back when
guilded pages with words of woe and sin
that had captured reflections of her spirit so bold.

Reminiscing the days as her past unfolds
of how love had blossomed and then grew cold
those locked away secrets from deep within,
............ O' those forgotten treasures.

Preserved on paper the truth she had told
of those times she yearned his heart to hold
in ink that flowed, from her ivory pen
she relived those days and nights again,
through images past her memories strolled
............ O' those forgotten treasures.

 :rose

mirror image white
shades of gray integrated
sun hidden from view

 :rose

Night Song

Stillness of night
broken by song
she's weary and weak
from traveling long
seeking her mate
he hears her story
as they sing to each other
their lament of worry
time stands still
between each reply
he tells her, be strong
no need to cry
morning will come
and together they'll be
it's the way of the wild
wolf he and she.

 :rose

The Only One

I am the only one set aside
a puppet without strings
small, insignificant
a spec in the universe.

I am the only one searching
in the vastness of yesterday
the unknown of tomorrow
for the destiny I long for.

I am the only one aware
draped within myself
determined to survive
the humanity of mankind.

I am the only one responsible
for feelings bottled up
inside me, ready to burst
with no strength to voice them.

I am the only one facing demons
struggling to conquer reality
searching for others like myself
through this window, called life.

... or so it seems, at times.

 :rose
~ Marsha ~
 

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Re: Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« Reply #8 on: July 26, 2008, 04:44 PM »
I've enjoyed reading all your Whispered Thoughts and your other writings too.  Glad you post them here for everyone to read! :rose

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Re: Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« Reply #9 on: July 31, 2008, 10:28 PM »
thanks Carrie ... I appreciate you stopping by - glad you enjoyed the reading :)
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Re: Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« Reply #10 on: April 03, 2009, 10:09 PM »
Amazing writing Daisy, as always; the last one struck me particularly. One thing I know for sure. You are not alone!...Russ
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Re: Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« Reply #11 on: April 04, 2009, 09:35 AM »
thank you Russ ...... that last one must've been written on one of my "off" days.  I think a lot of people can relate to it though -- Although it's good to search our souls now and then, I'm glad the days of feeling alone are gone (for me).
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Re: Musing right along ... Whispered Thoughts
« Reply #12 on: June 03, 2010, 08:52 PM »
musing right along ....

Darkness brought a chill,
shadows enveloped,
and I was overcome
with thoughts of the past,
visions of unfulfilled dreams
sorrow, loneliness -
and restless sleep.

 :rose
~ Marsha ~
 

"Abilities wither under faultfinding, blossom with encouragement." -- Donald A. Laird