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Offline seaspirit06

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« on: October 16, 2006, 12:47 AM »
Light blue clear warm cool
Gliding so peaceful alone
Bubbles off my hand

 ':sun'  '<img:'>
“Some circumstantial evidence is very strong as when you find a trout in the milk”

Henry David Thoreau

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« Reply #1 on: October 23, 2006, 08:41 AM »
Oh, bubbles, love the way you say that.
This is lovely and makes me want to get one of those
small bottles of bubbles like I had as a kid, and blow bubbles!'<img:'>

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« Reply #2 on: October 23, 2006, 11:51 PM »
Thanks Kay.

Thanks for the help on my nicAnon poem also.

This poem, along with three others, I published in a quarterly Masters swim newsletter. My swim teammates enjoyed them, especially the team captain(!).

Glad you liked it.

google "bubbleology" and you'll find stuff like this!

LINK:
http://www.bubblemania.com/amazing-photos/art/2006/7005_sm.jpg

Have a great day and congrats on all that posting.

Scott
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“Some circumstantial evidence is very strong as when you find a trout in the milk”

Henry David Thoreau

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« Reply #3 on: October 28, 2006, 12:23 AM »
Scott, that's great. It's always nice to be recognized! ':writer:'

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« Reply #4 on: October 28, 2006, 08:05 AM »
now thats a bubble and love the haiku
Never Let Yesterday's Pain
Ruin Tomorrow's Dreams