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Offline Sampo

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The ingrained aspiration of a lower class optimist
« on: September 28, 2006, 04:44 AM »
RANDOM 'I' HAIKU


If I could only
form the words I would express -
Fuck, I'd be famous !

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I pass time around
Yoda bong puffing out life
between hunger pangs.

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I trade currency
distractions behind closed doors
for the outsider.

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I pummel paper
pen in hand, call the black dots
inverted night sky.

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This is why I watch
The Simpsons at six, and not
A current affair -

The newsreporters
will step over a newborn
to scoop up a corpse.

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« Reply #1 on: September 28, 2006, 09:40 AM »
This one made me smile, Sampo.  Clever and silly

Offline Sampo

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« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2006, 11:11 AM »
Clever and silly.

My favourite attributes.

Thanks Bittersweet.

Regards,

Sampo.

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« Reply #3 on: October 08, 2006, 01:09 AM »
clever indeed
A mind is a precious thing to taste.

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« Reply #4 on: November 07, 2006, 09:07 AM »
sampo
you work hard enough
when it comes down to it  /thats all we have /work
so Famous  /  you may well be /one day
and i wish you succuss  for that

warm regards jack




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Offline Sampo

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« Reply #5 on: November 07, 2006, 09:18 AM »
Ha, ha... thanks Shrop,

I totally forgot about this one...

kinda cringeworthy really, but
still I smile...

by the by, famous, not much of a quest
too much Salinger in these vains
prefer musty little caverns, blinds drawn,
vapours of smoke and the hum of
double screen -
tv and computer, side by side, alternating gaze

Regards,

sampo.

PS

India, yes sounds like the place to be these days...
and I doo so enjoy a cheap bollywood movie...

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« Reply #6 on: November 07, 2006, 09:43 AM »
I had to giggle when I read this  
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Never Let Yesterday's Pain
Ruin Tomorrow's Dreams

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« Reply #7 on: November 09, 2006, 12:00 PM »
this is fun-fucking-tastic! (sorry, I'm overly exuberant today for some reason) . . . i'm happy i got the chance to read this. thank you. ':p'

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 Â     my horse ate it.

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« Reply #8 on: November 10, 2006, 05:50 PM »
vocabulary
limits my expression now
and forever more, oops

yes good change

wield
reeled
congealed
sealed
concealed
field
revealed
rancid
pork
and
eels

i don't know
liked the read though
damn i thought this was the zen forum
lazy rhyme
miller time


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“Some circumstantial evidence is very strong as when you find a trout in the milk”

Henry David Thoreau