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PlasticKisses

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Haiku of the Seasons
« on: August 26, 2004, 02:59 PM »
Snow White skin craves heat,
Hot sun provides fresh comfort.
Waves lick my pink toes.

Coloured trees share wealth.
Nature reveals her new shade.
Fantasies revealed.

Snow lingers close by.
Kisses hide in bright doorways.
Dream-like happiness.

A fresh breath of air,
Beauty awakens and smiles.
Promises renewed.


Feel free to share your take of each season.

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« Reply #1 on: August 26, 2004, 03:14 PM »
Just beautiful!
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« Reply #2 on: August 26, 2004, 04:38 PM »
wonderful visuals here..........your words do  flow over the bark of white
Never Let Yesterday's Pain
Ruin Tomorrow's Dreams

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« Reply #3 on: August 28, 2004, 02:31 PM »
Very clever. I like the idea.

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« Reply #4 on: October 13, 2004, 08:49 PM »

Sunrise – Sunset

Sun’s curtain opens
Silence bows, greets morning life
Nature’s painted view

Across moon lit night
Stars dance for new lovers eyes
Casting shadows dreams
~.~ }!{ ~.~
Never Let Yesterday's Pain
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witt

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« Reply #5 on: October 15, 2004, 04:32 AM »
Very nice, Sunny!
I like your visuals.

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« Reply #6 on: October 18, 2004, 06:34 PM »
Awesome sunny!!!  You are sooo good at Haiku!  
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« Reply #7 on: October 25, 2004, 12:50 PM »
Night Voices

All is clear and still.
Oak groves whisper in the wind;
Under an owl moon.
*turning on her heel, she disappears, like leaves before the wind*

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« Reply #8 on: October 25, 2004, 12:51 PM »
love it AlluraD  under a owl moon beautiful line the whole is fablious
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