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Offline Kay

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Milk Drop Haiku
« on: October 30, 2006, 10:13 PM »
Milk drops brush the sun
red sky is moving winter
atop mountain peaks

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Milk Drop Haiku
« Reply #1 on: October 31, 2006, 08:49 AM »
love this...........milk drop clouds great way to describe them
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Milk Drop Haiku
« Reply #2 on: October 31, 2006, 12:27 PM »
I like Haikus...milk drops, cool, is it ok to reply with a haiku?

Supposed to do with nature, iknow, and be 575, but somehere i heard it was ok to break rules on occasion:

Havasu ten flags
Open water swim under
London Bridge contrast

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“Some circumstantial evidence is very strong as when you find a trout in the milk”

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Milk Drop Haiku
« Reply #3 on: November 02, 2006, 06:50 AM »
kay

I am intrigued by the opening line
Love the colour of the haiku
You could be describing what lays in the west from our studio door

Regards jack
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« Reply #4 on: November 02, 2006, 08:01 PM »
LS, seaspirit, Jack, I'm glad each saw something in this one.
i don't do many of these and sometimes feel restricted to the guidelines of haiku but I do love them. I want to do more. ':laff'