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Offline jack lindus

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« on: October 26, 2006, 06:34 AM »
Spring


Autumn fruits fall
Bruised memories decay
Her grandmother smiles
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« Reply #1 on: October 26, 2006, 10:13 AM »
simple, colorful and sweet
don't ya just love haiku's
you can say so much with so little
Never Let Yesterday's Pain
Ruin Tomorrow's Dreams

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« Reply #2 on: October 26, 2006, 12:25 PM »
lady sunshine greetings
it is good to hear your voice
yes haiku  
a breeze cooling the eyes /settling the mind
a beautiful form

reguards jack
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« Reply #3 on: October 30, 2006, 10:10 PM »
Although there is much I have to learn about this form I believe it should give the reader a strong connection between nature and humanity, which this one carved out beautifully.

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« Reply #4 on: November 02, 2006, 04:39 AM »
kay
forgive me

i did not see your comment
thankyou

some of the best haiku were  written by geshia
To be culturally entertained by geisha
Well there are no words ............
blossom breeze and singing stones
jack
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