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Offline Voodoo Child

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« on: May 24, 2006, 01:57 PM »
"Temple in the Sand" flash poem


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« Reply #1 on: May 24, 2006, 07:31 PM »
Right on girl LOVE IT I have always had a soft spot for the
Egypt
such beauty and mystery and Intriguing wonder
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« Reply #2 on: May 24, 2006, 11:44 PM »
Thanks, Sunny. I've always been fascinated with Egypt too. You may remember from a poem I posted a couple months ago, that I used to live there about 3,000 years ago!!!! heh heh heh! '<img:'>
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« Reply #3 on: May 25, 2006, 01:46 PM »
yepper I remember reading it great work
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« Reply #4 on: June 01, 2006, 03:50 AM »
I think you have an amazing talent cookie.  Not just the poetry, but your incredible ability to fuse all three mediums together.

For someone who has just started, you seem to be a natural.
 ':sun'  ':sun'  ':sun'
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« Reply #5 on: June 01, 2006, 03:10 PM »
Allen... Thank you so much for your encouraging words! I am in love with the idea of combining all these elements to express poetry. This idea has been in my mind for decades. This is how I see poetry in my mind when I read it.
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« Reply #6 on: June 05, 2006, 02:00 AM »
Wonderful job. your so creative. '<img:'>