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Offline Voodoo Child

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« on: April 12, 2006, 02:39 AM »
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I will get better...I promise!</font>
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« Reply #1 on: April 12, 2006, 11:24 AM »
Bravo & way to go Girl
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« Reply #2 on: April 12, 2006, 01:24 PM »
very very nice VooDoo, welcome to paradise ..poem-torials are only limited by ones imagination ..and imaginations are not limited ..the sky ..um no ..the universe is boundless.

we only need 2 more poets to do a poem-torial and this ol' janitor will try his hand again..

keep up the good work VooDoo..

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« Reply #3 on: April 12, 2006, 03:07 PM »
Well done Voodoo.  Absolutely fantastic for a first attempt.  You obviously have an innate talent for this.  Can't wait to see some more.  Keep practicing.
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« Reply #4 on: April 12, 2006, 04:20 PM »
Hey, Sunny, rg and Allen, Thanks so much for the pat of the back. I needed that! I've already started another one. It's very time consuming, but, great fun. I hope to be posting another one in the near future. (the next one will be a little smaller, heh heh)
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« Reply #5 on: April 12, 2006, 06:06 PM »
had to come back n look again I love the whole thing and the words are beautiful
very creative




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« Reply #6 on: April 13, 2006, 03:49 AM »
Oh, my Dear Sunny! Thanks sooo much!  '<img:'>
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