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Offline Perplexed1

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Dreary Day
« on: March 30, 2006, 10:41 AM »
Dreary skies clouds hanging low
Heavy eyes can barely peep
Swollen with moisture rain ready to flow
Rest little one its time for sleep


-T.H
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« Reply #1 on: April 01, 2006, 08:47 PM »
Perplexed, you have inspired me to try my hand at haiku. ':writer:'
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« Reply #2 on: April 02, 2006, 02:04 PM »
Thats great VooDoo but perplex wrote a "Quatrian"   a quatrain is a poem or stanza of four lines. It is a very popular form of poetry. Famous poets like William Blake and T. S. Eliot used quatrains.. '<img'>

a Haiku is a poem of 5-7-5 syllables ..they both our cool and fun to write ...we have an ongoing [qua]train, np pun intended,  here if you would like to join in...


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« Reply #3 on: April 03, 2006, 08:09 AM »
I'm glad I inspired you  in someway.. '<img'>
I'm  sure no matter what you write  you will do well at it..
have fun.. '<img'>  ':bnik'
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« Reply #4 on: April 03, 2006, 02:14 PM »
Once again ........what lovely work Perplexed. Keep on. I am becoming one of  your biggest fans

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« Reply #5 on: April 04, 2006, 08:14 AM »
hey I'm blushing here, Kyna...... you give me to much credit
Thanks though ,for being kind '<img'>
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« Reply #6 on: April 05, 2006, 09:41 PM »
ooopppssss.... ':blush:'
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« Reply #7 on: April 18, 2006, 05:38 AM »
I like the images you've created here. Thanks for the read

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« Reply #8 on: May 04, 2006, 08:38 AM »
Thanks Vampiredust, I appreciate your  comment.:) and your  welcome
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