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« Reply #14 on: August 19, 2005, 05:29 AM »
Well, oops again. That's 7.

Obey or she will raise cain.

o bey or she will raise cain=7 It should be 5.

Also haiku shouldn't rhyme.

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« Reply #15 on: August 19, 2005, 08:02 AM »
lol... "what was I thinking"

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« Reply #16 on: August 19, 2005, 03:32 PM »
I fixed my part was gonna let rg fix his opps
Never Let Yesterday's Pain
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« Reply #17 on: August 19, 2005, 03:43 PM »
Obey, lest she raise Cain.
We humans need a lesson
in humility.
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« Reply #18 on: August 19, 2005, 08:21 PM »
Oh, how I hate to be the picky B#$@$, but isn't
"Obey, lest she raise Cain." = 6?
 I definitely agree with the message, though. You think that maybe I need a cup or two of humility? You betcha!

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« Reply #19 on: August 19, 2005, 08:24 PM »
In humility
I bow to lower my head
For the ax to drop.

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« Reply #20 on: August 19, 2005, 10:30 PM »
For the ax to drop
One seeks wisdom’s helping ink
Witt’s feathers assist
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« Reply #21 on: August 23, 2005, 08:42 PM »
Witt’s feathers assist
like the colors of autumn
harmony bestows
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« Reply #22 on: August 27, 2005, 06:31 AM »
Harmony bestows
A true pleasure of comfort
Magical music

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« Reply #23 on: August 30, 2005, 08:57 PM »
Magical music
Freed in the night, filled her heart
Waking slumber dreams




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« Reply #24 on: September 01, 2005, 05:24 AM »
"Waking new dreams" is only 4 syllables.

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« Reply #25 on: September 10, 2005, 08:41 AM »
oops here ya go


Magical music
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« Reply #26 on: September 15, 2005, 01:38 PM »
Waking slumber dreams
earth glowed from the moon above
centered on dawns edge
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« Reply #27 on: September 16, 2005, 06:15 AM »
centered on dawn's edge
escorted by bright angels
a prelude toward peace