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peaceangel

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« on: February 09, 2005, 10:17 AM »
a colourless world
devoid of every emotion
shadowed by pain

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soul broken apart
a heart that breathes no more
this meaningless life

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no tears left to cry
my spirit has been destroyed
where has the love gone

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empty eyes longing
looking for the love now lost
broken heart and soul

Offline Lady SunShine

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« Reply #1 on: February 09, 2005, 05:06 PM »
beautiful Haiku's all heart felt
Never Let Yesterday's Pain
Ruin Tomorrow's Dreams

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« Reply #2 on: February 10, 2005, 07:54 AM »
Thank you for your comment, it is truly appreciated. '<img'>

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« Reply #3 on: February 10, 2005, 08:26 AM »
peace angel~
   Sad pieces though beautifully done.....I love the tanka/senyru/haiku form....use it a lot~
*turning on her heel, she disappears, like leaves before the wind*

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« Reply #4 on: February 11, 2005, 05:33 PM »
thank you allura d , i also like the haiku format, only recently discovered it but love how you can put so much emotion into a small piece. thanks for your comment.  '<img:'>