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Offline WordFaery

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« on: May 27, 2004, 11:40 PM »
Afterglow

Foolish old woman
playing with matches
and emotional kerosene.

Deaf to alarms
my tissue wrapped heart
consumed by your flame.

Sackcloth and ashes
my Souvenirs
of rapid oxidation


© 1/17/04
Edited 05/28/04


Beginning to feel like the crit hog.   '<img:'>
"Come Fairies, take me out of this dull world for I would ride with you upon the wind and dance upon the mountains like a flame."      W.B. Yeats



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Offline petro

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« Reply #1 on: May 28, 2004, 12:52 AM »
wow WF this is a really good piece.  Great job!

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"...I know you wont kill me,
but I wonder sometimes..."
(Bowie)

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« Reply #2 on: May 28, 2004, 08:32 AM »
Sorry, WF, I just don't see a thing to chop!

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« Reply #3 on: May 28, 2004, 03:49 PM »
crit hog? no way ..we love your participation here at the AX ..just waitin fer ya to make one slip ..so we can CHOP!!! ya ... lol ..j/k ...keep'em comin' WF

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« Reply #4 on: May 28, 2004, 07:28 PM »
wow this is a remarkable words very well done
Never Let Yesterday's Pain
Ruin Tomorrow's Dreams