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Offline Halo

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each leaf
« on: May 24, 2019, 01:55 PM »
like a dishevelled drunk
careening around the back yard
autumn
intoxicated on colour
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen

Offline Wordweaver

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Re: each leaf
« Reply #1 on: May 24, 2019, 05:25 PM »
Halo, I liked this poem so much I am going to put on some multicolored
goggles go to the back yard and maybe the weeds will look like Tulips.
Weave
a good poet is like a bride
Something old, something new, something borrowed
but mostly you.

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« Reply #2 on: May 25, 2019, 02:08 AM »

Ah Weave, you made my day. Say hi to the tulips for me  :sunny
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen

Offline GaerLlwyd

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Re: each leaf
« Reply #3 on: May 25, 2019, 10:46 PM »
Yes!  I can see them blowing around inside the fence . . . completely soused!  A visual encounter -- a VERY visual encounter.  Thanks for the view.

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« Reply #4 on: May 26, 2019, 12:06 AM »

You're most welcome and thank you too! :)
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen