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Offline Halo

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no change
« on: May 20, 2019, 09:34 AM »
I watch your face
for signs of emotion
flitting across your features
trying to sort and sift
the probabilities
of now and then
reconciling past
and present
not considering future
you were never candid
nothing’s changed

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Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen

Offline Wordweaver

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Re: no change
« Reply #1 on: May 23, 2019, 08:36 AM »
Halo,
Great write and my favorite poems are ones  packed  into
small containers but are completely filling.
Weave
a good poet is like a bride
Something old, something new, something borrowed
but mostly you.

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Re: no change
« Reply #2 on: May 24, 2019, 09:47 AM »

Thanks Weave! :)
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen

Offline daisyxo

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Re: no change
« Reply #3 on: May 27, 2019, 10:40 AM »
Sounds like someone from my past, I can relate!
~ Marsha ~
 

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