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Offline mojojames

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pas de deux
« on: October 02, 2018, 12:11 AM »

Dust motes whirl
in morning sun,
as street babble
blooms,
we lazily turn over
and unfold waking.

Our hands
languidly
dance over
night-ravished
limbs.

I seek refuge
in your soft expanse;
tongues swirl,
cresting rhythms
in slow motion.

We
receive the day
sprawled
before us,
anxious for voices
to complement
its own, 
affirming,
stark naked
light.

Offline daisyxo

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Re: pas de deux
« Reply #1 on: October 02, 2018, 09:24 AM »
Tender and loving ... and such a nice way to greet each other in the morning
~ Marsha ~
 

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Offline Halo

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Re: pas de deux
« Reply #2 on: October 15, 2018, 01:58 AM »
Bravo! Beautifully done! 
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen

Offline mojojames

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Re: pas de deux
« Reply #3 on: October 15, 2018, 05:18 PM »
Thanks Halo - I wrote it originally in tight rhyme scheme
but it works better, for me, in this form - RC