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Offline Wordweaver

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Deep Surrender
« on: July 01, 2018, 05:56 AM »

Deep Surrender

Here in the dawn of an epic relationship
we speak with bliss about honor and respect.
Hanging out in the hush of nights embrace
we share secrets only we create selfishly.

Deep in the dark your kiss will render
the joyous gift that love surrenders.
With the glow of sunrise and a new day
I rejoice that you chose to come my way.
a good poet is like a bride
Something old, something new, something borrowed
but mostly you.

Offline daisyxo

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Re: Deep Surrender
« Reply #1 on: July 10, 2018, 08:23 PM »
Building new relationships can be exciting.  A glimpse peaks the interest :-)
~ Marsha ~

"Abilities wither under faultfinding, blossom with encouragement." -- Donald A. Laird

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Re: Deep Surrender
« Reply #2 on: July 11, 2018, 08:06 AM »

I love this write, Weave, the newness and developing of a relationship is something isn't it!
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen