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Offline Halo

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nights
« on: November 18, 2017, 03:33 AM »
Racing towards dawn
my red rimmed eyes
squint against
the oncoming light
nerves jangled
from lack of sleep -
not lack of thought.

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Re: nights
« Reply #1 on: November 19, 2017, 11:22 AM »
The day following is usually miserable,  too.  If this is what's going on for you, I hope it doesn't last long.
~ Marsha ~
 

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Offline Wordweaver

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Re: nights
« Reply #2 on: November 22, 2017, 04:06 PM »
Halo, another short jab that has knockout potential I like it a lot.

Just me and you a dog named Boo.
Weave
a good poet is like a bride
Something old, something new, something borrowed
but mostly you.

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Re: nights
« Reply #3 on: December 25, 2017, 04:33 AM »


Thanks so much Weave, much appreciated! :)
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen