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Offline Halo

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Heaven
« on: November 16, 2017, 07:38 PM »
I'd send you a postcard
but it's too small
for the important things
and I don't know your
forwarding address -
you moved


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Offline daisyxo

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Re: Heaven
« Reply #1 on: November 19, 2017, 11:10 AM »
Heavy heart that says a lot of important things in just a few words
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Offline Wordweaver

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Re: Heaven
« Reply #2 on: November 22, 2017, 04:03 PM »
Halo, You said a ton with just a few lines, reminds me of Emily. Good Job girl
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a good poet is like a bride
Something old, something new, something borrowed
but mostly you.

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Re: Heaven
« Reply #3 on: December 25, 2017, 04:32 AM »

Thanks Weave, solid praise coming from you.  :dblu
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen