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Offline Halo

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Words end
« on: August 02, 2017, 03:09 AM »



sadness overcomes her
saki bottle in hand
she bears witness
to your silence

you once described her
as a lush
provocative
Saki-swilling Geisha
with a lot to say
poking and prompting
niggling and nagging her forte

I ache for her sadness
she is fading
slipping
slipping
slowly away

who wants a used muse!

but it’s ok
they’re still bottling saki
and sakura blossoms
will always fall into clever Haiku

I thought she deserved a mention
for her excesses and inconstancies

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For all flesh is as grass, and all the glory of man as the flower of grass. The grass wither, and the flower thereof falls away:

1 Peter 1:24





Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen

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Re: Words end
« Reply #1 on: August 02, 2017, 09:42 PM »
"who wants a used muse" ... his muse is always welcome to hang around - maybe some of her will rub off on those of us who have lost ours. We can keep some saki and sakura blossoms around for her.
~ Marsha ~
 

"Abilities wither under faultfinding, blossom with encouragement." -- Donald A. Laird

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Re: Words end
« Reply #2 on: August 03, 2017, 12:05 AM »
So deep and beautiful sis.   I feel your profound sadness here.  It's the first poetry I've read since hearing of g's passing.  It meant something to me.  You were his angel on earth, and now he is yours in heaven.  Much love to you.
I felt it shelter to speak to you  ~Emily Dickinson

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Re: Words end
« Reply #3 on: August 03, 2017, 12:22 AM »
Hey elise, thank you! It's so good to hear from your, it's been way too long. I did receive
your Christmas card by the way, again thank you.

There are so many things running around in my head about G. I'm sad and glad his struggle
is over. He has battled on too many fronts for too long. Peace and relief and unconditional
love to him in Heaven.

Hugs and love to you too, B
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen

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Re: Words end
« Reply #4 on: August 04, 2017, 04:55 AM »
"who wants a used muse" ... his muse is always welcome to hang around - maybe some of her will rub off on those of us who have lost ours. We can keep some saki and sakura blossoms around for her.

Nice thought, daisy!  *hug*
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen

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Re: Words end
« Reply #5 on: August 21, 2017, 02:06 PM »
abused is my muse
amazingly she returns
to inspire again
 :rose
I felt it shelter to speak to you  ~Emily Dickinson

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Re: Words end
« Reply #6 on: August 23, 2017, 09:23 AM »

Miss Halo,

I just realized after all this time you are much deserving
of your appropriate name.  I recently found me a used
muse with low mileage and in pristine condition. A very
unique and creative write with your own special frosting
added as usual.   *beer*
Weave
a good poet is like a bride
Something old, something new, something borrowed
but mostly you.

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Re: Words end
« Reply #7 on: August 26, 2017, 08:05 PM »
Weave, hi!

It would seem there's a shuffle up in the muse world it. A shift in museal logistics. 
Ruffled, agitated emotions amongst the muse fraternity, the possible cause neglect?  :tongue

Thanks for the heads up with this piece.

So good you've been visiting. Perhaps a piece or two or your
writings to spice up the place, please?  Not to shy to beg!

Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen