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Offline samspeaks

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black sabbath
« on: March 30, 2013, 10:50 AM »
i wallow in hunger
i die in the abyss
i am empty
a pitiful fisherman
denier of the truth
stars I followed yesterday
fallen in my youth.

Offline Halo

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Re: black sabbath
« Reply #1 on: March 31, 2013, 12:08 AM »

Despair expressed in so few words is powerful!
It speaks to me of Judas, whether that is what/who you meant, that is what I read.

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Offline samspeaks

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Re: black sabbath
« Reply #2 on: March 31, 2013, 11:27 AM »
thanks Halo. You're close. I was identifying with Peter, who had ont Sabbaths of all time.

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Re: black sabbath
« Reply #3 on: March 31, 2013, 07:42 PM »

I should have known,

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a pitiful fisherman
denier of the truth


excellent piece.
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen