Author Topic: Untitled  (Read 6601 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline LorriS

  • Alley Cat
  • *
  • Posts: 5
Untitled
« on: March 12, 2013, 12:00 PM »
She sits,
Sentry.
Still.
Staring.
Seeing sadness.

Seeming stoic.
Silently shrieking!
Systematically
Shattering.

(I wrote this while sitting in the hospital with my daughter)

Offline Halo

  • Senior Alley Hostess
  • *
  • Posts: 2155
  • who finds a faithful friend finds a treasure
Re: Untitled
« Reply #1 on: March 20, 2013, 05:44 AM »
Hi LorriS,

There is power in your words. A Staccato punch!
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen