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Offline Halo

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Re: Write Something
« Reply #14 on: October 02, 2012, 08:52 PM »
I wrote this before the sticky notes and forgot to post it first  :tongue


the challenge:
a letter to oneself
dangerous if the truth be told
if the truth can be borne without
running
and what truth would I tell myself
do I have the courage to
delve into the deep of me
the intense scrutiny I might turn
inward would offer what?
self awareness
change
liberation
haven't I done plenty of that
my past is marked with introspection
little scars here and there where
I've attacked myself
endeavoring to unmask
heed the warnings
seems to me the truth about oneself
is often hard to bare and bear.

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Re: Write Something
« Reply #15 on: October 03, 2012, 05:24 AM »




Oh, I like this, halo. You are absolutely right.

Love this:
my past is marked with introspection
little scars here and there where
I've attacked myself
endeavoring to unmask


Super concluding line!





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Re: Write Something
« Reply #16 on: October 03, 2012, 07:25 AM »
Thanks so much, witt!  :rose
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen