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wood paneled forget me nots
« on: August 31, 2012, 09:45 PM »
with each sharp turn

on backseat floor

empty coffee mugs
 
clink

reminders of

a suspension—

in dire need of repair




The Black Keys- Little Black Submarines


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Re: woodpaneled forget me nots
« Reply #1 on: September 01, 2012, 05:27 AM »




Not at all what I was expecting!



Thanks for the smile this morning.






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Re: wood paneled forget me nots
« Reply #2 on: September 01, 2012, 08:33 PM »
Hi 7,  It's the day to day things that often make a stronger point in poetry, nice one!

Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen

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Re: wood paneled forget me nots
« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2012, 05:12 PM »
Thanks for the look ladies. take care