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Offline Kay

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in the next ten minutes
« on: June 29, 2012, 09:06 PM »
a knot explodes in someone's head

rain is no longer invisible but a nine key chord
of sound

lines that separate blocks of sidewalk
follow your steps like  short stanzas

white cups atop  steel lamps light the boulevard

a sparrow and mosquito pass each other

night comes with comfort

someone gives birth and a room
fills in the smell of cedar wood
while a  pocketwatch falls, breaks,
snaps open.

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Re: in the next ten minutes
« Reply #1 on: June 29, 2012, 10:25 PM »

Kay, ooo you're starting to think like me  *hehe*

this is very strong for me..

a sparrow and mosquito pass each other

Hope your staying cool ..prediction for tomorrow 109F


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Re: in the next ten minutes
« Reply #2 on: June 29, 2012, 10:55 PM »
great minds think alike  :dblu

it is very hot out there. more time to stay inside and catch up on whatever keeps me cool :wine

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Re: in the next ten minutes
« Reply #3 on: June 29, 2012, 11:28 PM »

yep me too ..a/c and bottle of snake venom ..lol..







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Re: in the next ten minutes
« Reply #4 on: June 30, 2012, 07:32 AM »



Good job with this, kay.


a knot explodes in someone's head

Is this the same as a lightbulb over one's head. Love it!

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Re: in the next ten minutes
« Reply #5 on: June 30, 2012, 07:37 AM »

Don't let the heat rattle you  :dblu :dblu


yep me too ..a/c and bottle of snake venom ..lol..

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Re: in the next ten minutes
« Reply #6 on: June 30, 2012, 07:37 AM »

Witt,  that is a great analogy.  I had not thought of that!  :rose





Good job with this, kay.


a knot explodes in someone's head

Is this the same as a lightbulb over one's head. Love it!