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Offline Matthew Pelletier

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Desensitized
« on: May 19, 2012, 08:50 PM »
A bloated chef slices into an onion.
His eyes remain parched.

witt

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Re: Desensitized
« Reply #1 on: May 20, 2012, 05:03 AM »


I like the antithesis!


Offline seraph

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Re: Desensitized
« Reply #2 on: May 21, 2012, 02:12 PM »
I found the contrast of bloated and tearless to be quite interesting.

Where does all that bloat go I wonder.

Great poem,

seraph

Offline illiterati

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Re: Desensitized
« Reply #3 on: May 21, 2012, 03:28 PM »
long ago he sacrificed
his tears
to the ancient craft.

he cuts.
he hopes, but
feels no
pain.