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Offline illiterati

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sapphics
« on: April 11, 2012, 01:37 PM »
I very rarely work in set forms. but here’s a Sapphic. as far as I can tell, the meter is ok except for the line’s final u -- --, for which I’ve often substituted u – u


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-- u --    x    -- u u --     u -- --
-- u --    x    -- u u --     u -- --
-- u --    x    -- u u --     u -- --
       -- u  u  --  u

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