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Offline 7

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now, I know I've been changed
« on: February 17, 2012, 11:58 PM »
ep i neph rine drips, hemostatic clips
there is nothing po et ic about this

bureaucratic trips, silent, code blue, lips
I see you—

even when no one else does


Tom Waits - I've been changed

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Re: now, I know I've been changed
« Reply #1 on: February 18, 2012, 05:58 AM »



Oh, I can see this! Not the video, but the words here are powerful! I see it.





I listen for each lonely breath.

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Re: now, I know I've been changed
« Reply #2 on: February 18, 2012, 04:38 PM »
I submit myself to you.
Well played.
Beautifully done.
The words.
The presentation.
Bravo.

(Another celebrity bites the dust.)
Nothing to do with something.
(The lighter licks the spoon.)

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Re: now, I know I've been changed
« Reply #3 on: February 18, 2012, 10:14 PM »
I submit myself to you.
Well played.
Beautifully done.
The words.
The presentation.
Bravo.

(Another celebrity bites the dust.)
Nothing to do with something.
(The lighter licks the spoon.)

thanx for stopping (.) bye

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Re: now, I know I've been changed
« Reply #4 on: February 19, 2012, 11:51 AM »
Respectfully 7,

I believe that change is overrated.
Consistency is a rare finding.
"A community of poets is like a community of cats." joey

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Re: now, I know I've been changed
« Reply #5 on: February 19, 2012, 12:36 PM »
Respectfully 7,

I believe that change is overrated.
Consistency is a rare finding.

"Change is inevitable— except from a vending machine" -Robert C. Gallagher

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Re: now, I know I've been changed
« Reply #6 on: February 23, 2012, 09:14 PM »


there is power in your brevity, 7!
Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen