Topic: My Mother Lies Dying

[Mojave]

Witt---


sorry, but this poem is cold and superficial.

just compare and contrast with your IBPC winner titled the jacket.  the death but lingering memories of a dead husband.


bernie 

[witt]

OUCH!

But thanks for your honesty.

[witt]

Witt---


sorry, but this poem is cold and superficial.

just compare and contrast with your IBPC winner titled the jacket.  the death but lingering memories of a dead husband.


bernie

Wait a minute. Now that I've thought about it, that's exactly what I was shooting for -- COLD -- no feelings!

[champagne_shoes]

Witt,

I cannot help but infer there is a poem behind this poem.
I require to see more of Your Mother.

Precisely, precisely
the colour of her eyes:

amber, turquoise, lapis lazuli, citrine, smokey quartz, blue topaz?

The gemstone match for her eyes are what this piece requires.  Do not, genuine Lady, drape yourself in diamonds.

[witt]

Thanks, Cs.

Isn't that typical! Always thinking of myself. I'm too old to be in the Me Generation. I'll see what I can do with this.