Marxistglue,
If simply written out, it would be a journal entry.
Given voice, more of a monotone than any real inflection invested in the presention, it was boring. Among the few concrete images, there were too many abstract rants.
I'm pretty much convinced that if I had the written form in front of me, it could be edited down to about ten lines, at most, without loosing any significant content.
In addition, staring at the same picture for over five minutes didn't help.
Bill