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Offline Halo

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idyll
« on: August 27, 2011, 12:24 AM »

what dances in this meadow
in the dappled afternoon light?

a butterfly perhaps
the rhythmic flutter of
its wings in flight
surging in the gentle breeze
before the onset of night

Be careful of your thoughts; they may become words at any moment.  ~  Ira Gassen

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Re: idyll
« Reply #1 on: November 28, 2011, 10:11 AM »
I like the black and white --- your poem gives it color ... very nice B :)
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