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Offline Wordweaver

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I found her
« on: November 10, 2010, 03:01 PM »

Well she jumped in bed
covered up her head
swore I couldn't find her
I knew damn well
she was telling a lie
so I jumped
right in behind her

She grabbed me by the goose
and wouldn't let loose
I grabbed her
by  the coffee grinder
when the white of an egg
ran down her leg
she knew damn well
I'd found her
Weave
a good poet is like a bride
Something old, something new, something borrowed
but mostly you.

Offline daisyxo

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Re: I found her
« Reply #1 on: November 13, 2010, 11:33 AM »
hhmm, upbeat, fun, exciting, and the egg whites made it all worth while lol!!!!
~ Marsha ~
 

"Abilities wither under faultfinding, blossom with encouragement." -- Donald A. Laird

Offline A_Mourning_Glory

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Re: I found her
« Reply #2 on: June 05, 2011, 12:42 PM »
Unique, highly imaginative.  Enjoyed :)
"I thought I'd begin by reading a poem by Shakespeare, but then I thought, why should I? He never reads any of mine."
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Offline eileenonguam

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Re: I found her
« Reply #3 on: June 05, 2011, 03:37 PM »
Great fun!  Allie allie outs in free :tongue
"and at my back I always hear time's wingéd chariot hurrying near..."
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