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Offline cy street

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another get out of my way
« on: October 31, 2010, 03:38 AM »
now was always better than then

Offline Marsupial Man

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Re: another get out of my way
« Reply #1 on: November 02, 2010, 02:27 PM »
The rhythm
The flow

images cascading

ya
i am in the way
my feet speak rain
a ballet of what might be


I don't capture any personal meaning from this piece, it just carries me.
My only issue is:

OPD

I have absolutely no reference point for those letters;
so, they are just meaningless letters for me.
As a result, I stumble through that part.

The rest is just a fun ride.

Take care of yourself,

Paul



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Re: another get out of my way
« Reply #2 on: November 08, 2010, 06:31 PM »
cy, MM,

Meaningless! Everything is Meaningless!  Hebraic idioms.  So, chasing after a breath, the wind, an entity uncaptured, which can not be captured.  You got what you can begotten, MM.

So enjoy your ride.

Regards,
Bill

Ps.  The second sober second thought.  Meaning is what makes my molecules move.  Each to his own molecular structure.



Offline Mojave

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Re: another get out of my way
« Reply #3 on: December 03, 2010, 04:36 PM »
Cy---

as always, i like the short bursts that fill my afternoon with color and hints of birds all summer.

venice beach
clear sky
santa monica mountains
malibu out my window



and here:




Allan Ginsberg: the American Sentence high on haiku --- one sentence of 17 syllables that captures one sharply observed moment---"Put on my tie in a taxi, short of breath, rushing to meditate."


yeah, like that.


bernie



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Night lowers its jewelblue wing
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Offline cy street

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Re: another get out of my way
« Reply #4 on: February 03, 2011, 02:06 AM »
M, when you quote:

"Put on my tie in a taxi, short of breath, rushing to meditate."

I reply:

TURF FEINZ "RIP Rich D" | YAK FILMS | DANCING in the RAIN, DANSE SOUS LA PLUIE, HIP HOP STREET DANCE


My tie choked the rearview mirror, between the ninth 1 and third 0, I pecked my keyboard.  This is what came out.

now was always better than then

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Re: another get out of my way
« Reply #5 on: November 10, 2015, 03:24 PM »
Here is another poem that is missing from the thread. Can someone explain this?
now was always better than then