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Offline eileenonguam

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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #448 on: June 20, 2011, 04:12 AM »
gazing at the ocean
longing for the peace
of the calm Pacific

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« Reply #449 on: June 20, 2011, 03:08 PM »
hiding in the leaves
hitching a ride into the house
on snake plant

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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #450 on: June 21, 2011, 04:07 AM »
terra cotta pots
lining the wrap-around porch
hibiscus in bloom

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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #451 on: June 21, 2011, 07:59 AM »
floating in the glass
adding tartness
to sweet iced tea

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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #452 on: January 17, 2012, 01:50 AM »
late morning
singing nuthatches
ponderosa pines


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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #453 on: January 17, 2012, 06:56 AM »
FYI: You aren't supposed to use the prompt word in the haiku. You only allude to it.



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eyeballs darting back and forth
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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #454 on: January 17, 2012, 11:15 AM »
Oops, my bad but doesn't that make the resulting  haiku too general?  I think it needs to specify what is referred to.  That's my take on haiku. Your haiku could be misinterpreted as referring to a person on a bad drug trip.  Just kidding...  *rofl*
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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #455 on: January 17, 2012, 02:06 PM »



hahaha  *rofl*

I went back and looked at the rules, WHICH I WROTE, and it doesn't even say that!! As a matter of fact in my first example, I USED THE WORD! I guess you can forget what I said about using the word in the haiku. Have at it and have FUN!!



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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #456 on: March 30, 2012, 06:25 PM »
Fearfull of
Hræsvelg's beating wings,
turn away.

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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #457 on: March 31, 2012, 05:43 AM »


twirling toward the blue
butterflies fall to the ground
drunken ravishment

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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #458 on: March 31, 2012, 10:48 AM »
Dog food, glue.
These are not for you.
Just run fast.

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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #459 on: March 31, 2012, 11:11 AM »


    your shadow high up
    on mountain peaks eclipsing
    below merry toast

             *beer* *beer*


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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #460 on: March 31, 2012, 12:10 PM »
fuedin' an' shinin'
Mos'ly myths I's tellin' you.
'cep' my ol' papi.

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Re: New Haiku Game
« Reply #461 on: April 01, 2012, 05:35 AM »



innumerable
unending and measureless
my love for you

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