Author Topic: Haiku River Tag  (Read 114423 times)

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witt

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #28 on: August 27, 2008, 03:13 PM »
I can taste the salt
left by ocean's sea kisses
as you ebbed away

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #29 on: September 03, 2008, 09:07 PM »
as you ebbed away
leaves dance upon the water's surface
confetti split

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #30 on: September 03, 2008, 10:29 PM »
confetti split
twin rivers of air wafted
kaleidoscope flood

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #31 on: September 03, 2008, 11:37 PM »
kaleidoscope flood
beyond violet edges
twilight's blue cascade
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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #32 on: September 04, 2008, 05:04 AM »
twilight's blue cascade
tumbled into a rushing
of love's emotion

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #33 on: September 04, 2008, 08:08 AM »
of love's emotion
no stream of Man's conciousness
brandishes more barbs
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witt

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #34 on: September 04, 2008, 11:12 AM »
brandishes more barbs
hurls more hurtful invectives
than a dried up swamp

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #35 on: September 10, 2008, 04:14 PM »
than a dried up swamp
the skeletons are buried
never to be found

witt

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #36 on: September 10, 2008, 05:22 PM »
Reminds me of PeeWee

never to be found
disappearing citizens
evil in a hearse

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #37 on: September 11, 2008, 04:16 AM »
evil in a hearse
Charon's ferry bound to Styx
silver buys passage
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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #38 on: September 11, 2008, 06:39 AM »
silver buys passage
on the ferry to nowhere
futile excursion

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #39 on: September 14, 2008, 08:25 PM »
futile excursion
but rest along the current
splash it on your chin

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #40 on: September 15, 2008, 04:40 AM »
splash it on your chin
cooling waters of knowledge
cup your hands and sip

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #41 on: September 16, 2008, 01:51 AM »
cup your hands and sip
Shannon's ancient blue cauldron
salmon boil upstream
I believe in making the world safe for our children, but not for our children's children, because I don't think children should be having sex.