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witt

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #14 on: August 26, 2008, 08:36 AM »
I am carried far
gasping through undercurrents
I will catch my breath

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« Reply #15 on: August 26, 2008, 08:46 AM »
I will catch my breath
once I reach the open seas
rivers live inside

witt

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« Reply #16 on: August 26, 2008, 10:41 AM »
rivers live inside
swirling currents of fury
peace, be my rudder

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« Reply #17 on: August 26, 2008, 11:15 AM »
peace, be my rudder
I sorely need you right now
cleanse me as a prayer

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« Reply #18 on: August 26, 2008, 11:25 AM »
cleanse me as a prayer
wash me in the deepest sea
bathe away my sins

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #19 on: August 26, 2008, 12:49 PM »
bathe away my sins
before they find the wrinkles
the mistaken waves



(I'm glad this thread is doing so well)

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« Reply #20 on: August 26, 2008, 02:38 PM »
the mistaken waves
took me as lowly flotsom
raised me to new heights

(Me, too.)

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« Reply #21 on: August 26, 2008, 03:00 PM »
raised me to new heights
be the river you once were
welcoming the rain




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« Reply #22 on: August 26, 2008, 03:11 PM »
welcoming the rain
brooks fill till overflowing
grateful to heaven

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #23 on: August 26, 2008, 05:46 PM »
grateful to heaven
rivers of kindness abound
beyond murky depths
I believe in making the world safe for our children, but not for our children's children, because I don't think children should be having sex.

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #24 on: August 26, 2008, 09:00 PM »
beyond the murky depths
in the dark the krakken waits
seals the sailor's fate

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« Reply #25 on: August 27, 2008, 05:43 AM »
seals the sailor's fate
memories of sea monsters
dwelling in his dreams

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« Reply #26 on: August 27, 2008, 12:24 PM »
dwelling in his dreams
Poseidon slumbers below
warm ocean currents
I believe in making the world safe for our children, but not for our children's children, because I don't think children should be having sex.

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« Reply #27 on: August 27, 2008, 01:36 PM »
warm ocean currents
form a lei beneath the sun
I can taste the salt