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Offline Kay

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Haiku River Tag
« on: August 18, 2008, 10:35 AM »
the river is you
in my heart will always be
our tears together

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #1 on: August 18, 2008, 11:06 AM »
our tears together
swollen streams unconscious thought
flooded emotion
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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #2 on: August 18, 2008, 03:05 PM »
Well you've been a busy bee since I've been gone Kay.
Oh boy, let's see if we can do river tag. (It fits right in with SplashHall!)

flooded emotion
wide as the Mississippi   
one laugh wipes us dry
I listen for each lonely breath.

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #3 on: August 18, 2008, 03:16 PM »
one laugh wipes us dry
along the river journey
the strong, swift current

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« Reply #4 on: August 18, 2008, 03:25 PM »
the strong swift current
of the mighty River Love
will always endure
I listen for each lonely breath.

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #5 on: August 18, 2008, 03:41 PM »
will always endure
beached fish, ebbing memories
drowned in stagnant air

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #6 on: August 19, 2008, 06:13 AM »
drowned in stagnant air
bayous filled with laziness
diverse life abounds
I listen for each lonely breath.

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #7 on: August 24, 2008, 02:21 PM »
diverse life abounds
beyond the flowing river
it's a liquid rose

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #8 on: August 24, 2008, 03:51 PM »
it's a liquid rose
the brook lazes peacefully
quiet harmony
I listen for each lonely breath.

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #9 on: August 24, 2008, 05:32 PM »
quiet harmony
bronze leaves in cool autumn air
canoe drifts downstream
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« Reply #10 on: August 25, 2008, 06:22 AM »
canoe drifts downstream
whirlpools circling 'round my dreams
disappearing fears
I listen for each lonely breath.

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #11 on: August 25, 2008, 08:07 PM »
disappering fears
fades into the water blue
happiness comes too

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #12 on: August 26, 2008, 04:28 AM »
disappearing fears
flow like a  rushing tiderace
toward an open sea
I listen for each lonely breath.

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Re: Haiku River Tag
« Reply #13 on: August 26, 2008, 08:30 AM »
toward an open sea
and every tributary
I am carried far