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Offline theMerlin

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Plans
« on: October 08, 2007, 09:54 PM »
Let me take all the evil words
spoken by the lords of power.
Collect them to guide me on
life's crooked path of cruelty.
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Souls scream to the dark lord
from the battle's silent roar.
Dread of the troll and demon
send weak in search of safety.
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I will capture the myriad droplets
of goodness falling from heaven.
Then will I use them to destroy
my naysayers and fearmongers.
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So carve all the fallen's epithets
high above the evil and craven.
Let me lead the powerful army
that defeats the black evil doers.
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Once, just once, may the song
of victory ring loudly from my lips.


(C)  tM  2007
Chomh sean leis an cheo agus níos sine faoi dhó.

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Re: Plans
« Reply #1 on: October 09, 2007, 05:49 AM »
This gives me the shivers, Merlin. I really like this:
Let me take all the evil words
spoken by the lords of power.
Collect them to guide me on

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Re: Plans
« Reply #2 on: October 09, 2007, 04:37 PM »
Bowing humbly.

Thank Thee, Mdme. Director...too kind, as ever.

Thou didst move me to add further plans.
Chomh sean leis an cheo agus níos sine faoi dhó.

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Re: Plans
« Reply #3 on: October 11, 2007, 08:04 AM »
Very nice.  Sort of a battle march as wayward, hardened knights might sing as they marched to a ridge to stare down the horde.  Sometimes when we pray, we pray for a righteous death.  Enjoyed.

Prof
You come on like a bloodstained hurricane
Leave me alone, let me be this time
You carry on like a holy man pushing redemption
I don't want to mention, the reason I know

- Disturbed

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Re: Plans
« Reply #4 on: October 11, 2007, 08:16 PM »
Bowing deeply, thank you kind sir.
Chomh sean leis an cheo agus níos sine faoi dhó.

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Re: Plans
« Reply #5 on: October 11, 2007, 10:56 PM »
Ah, the dreaded "evil doer"! As soon as I saw those two words my mind when straight to the movie 'Nell', starring Jodie Foster...eva doowa....eva doowa! And just couldn`t get it back!
"Painting is poetry and poetry is painting with the gift of speech"...Simonides {556 B.C.-468 B.C.}

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Re: Plans
« Reply #6 on: October 14, 2007, 09:23 PM »
Bowing -

Glad it created a synchronicity for thee.
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Re: Plans
« Reply #7 on: October 14, 2007, 11:06 PM »
Perhaps you misunderstood my comment. I could not stop laughing. Could that be a sign that I was possessed by the ....evah....doowaah?
"Painting is poetry and poetry is painting with the gift of speech"...Simonides {556 B.C.-468 B.C.}

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Re: Plans
« Reply #8 on: October 16, 2007, 09:19 AM »
I undertstand.
Chomh sean leis an cheo agus níos sine faoi dhó.

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Re: Plans
« Reply #9 on: October 16, 2007, 11:29 AM »
Time was not
Being was not
Only darkness
Unity
Darkness alone infinite

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Re: Plans
« Reply #10 on: October 18, 2007, 02:45 PM »
Pure of heart,
Bold of spirit,
play the role
of omnipotent.
Chomh sean leis an cheo agus níos sine faoi dhó.