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Offline menthie.nicole

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Powerful Pictures
« on: August 24, 2003, 04:14 PM »
~.~ Powerful Pictures ~.~


There is something in the way you speak
Something in the way you arrange the words you say
Touching my heart in such a way
It pulls tears to my eyes and such awe to my lips
You create such beautiful scenes
Painting such pictures with your many words
Many colors in each syllable
Such a love in the way you arrange the words you say
From your heart these pictures are created
From your lips they appear

Whether you bring me up to a mountian so high
As the birds soar right on by
With the sun as though its within reach
The clouds so soft to touch
So tender in the fingers...

Whether you bring me to a black room
A room where lonliness is your friend
Where nothing really matters yet it all does at once
Where you feel cold and the corners are damp
Damp beneath your feet....

Whether you bring me to a garden so beautiful
With the sun beating down upon your face
Flowers of all kinds dancing through your fingers
Not a care in the world everything is alright
A smile so wide upon your face....

Whether you bring me to your past
Your mothers and fathers...
Sisters and brothers..
Filled with heartache and desire
Dreams soar high within your soul

Something in the way you paint such beauty
In the way you arrange such powerful words
To create the most beautiful picture

menthie 2oo3.

Inspired by: Mountain Splash Poetry Cafe Poets
"Words are from the heart, but rhythm is found in the soul"

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Powerful Pictures
« Reply #1 on: August 25, 2003, 04:25 AM »
Love your poetry menthie, you create such interesting pictures in my mind girl ... '<img'>

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Powerful Pictures
« Reply #2 on: August 25, 2003, 09:43 PM »
Love this one menthie - so glad you posted it here for all to enjoy  -Looking forward to hearing  more of your work - smile...
"Become the dream that can never be departed from my soul" - Tobias

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Powerful Pictures
« Reply #3 on: August 25, 2003, 11:52 PM »
wonderful words here your have a picutre painting style
ty for sharing
Never Let Yesterday's Pain
Ruin Tomorrow's Dreams

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Re: Powerful Pictures
« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2019, 02:32 AM »
This poem is beautiful, and awe inspiring.  How I long for the return of the poets who understand where we began, and how we evolved all those years ago.  Although it isn't new I feel it deserves a boost to the top.
~ Marsha ~
 

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