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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #28 on: September 11, 2008, 08:09 AM »
I guess that shows how important one little letter is.
I listen for each lonely breath.

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #29 on: September 12, 2008, 11:31 AM »
Too true. I remembera news story here a few years back.
A second grader got expelled for a week because he misspelled rapped
on his spelling test...he left out a P.
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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #30 on: September 14, 2008, 08:22 PM »
with roughened browned hands
the lumberjack went back home
held onto his love

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #31 on: September 15, 2008, 04:35 AM »
held onto his love
despite blinding snow swirling
with one chilblained hand
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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #32 on: September 16, 2008, 01:58 AM »
with one chilblained hand
a mother's touch warms child's heart
spring blooms midst winter
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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #33 on: September 16, 2008, 11:37 AM »
spring blooms midst winter
daffodils emerge in snow
soft yellow faces
I listen for each lonely breath.

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #34 on: September 16, 2008, 07:14 PM »
soft yellow faces
are being hit by the rain
it pours forcefully

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #35 on: September 17, 2008, 05:22 AM »
it pours forcefully
a thousand droplets pricking
angry rains pursue
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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #36 on: September 17, 2008, 05:55 AM »
angry rains persue
rice fields ebb with bloated rats
monsoon seasoning
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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #37 on: September 17, 2008, 06:10 AM »
serene rice stands firm
nutrient inundation
flooding marsh waters
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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #38 on: September 17, 2008, 08:29 AM »
floating marsh waters
the Hawaiian islands green
I'd like to touch them

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #39 on: September 17, 2008, 08:39 AM »
I'd like to touch them
run my fingers through the fronds
ferny reseda
I listen for each lonely breath.

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #40 on: September 17, 2008, 08:12 PM »
ferny reseda
they are soft against my face
with pretty green colors

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #41 on: September 18, 2008, 04:11 AM »
pretty green colors
mangled and hackled cut grass
tickle barefoot toes
I listen for each lonely breath.