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Offline Kay

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Touch Me Haiku Tag
« on: November 15, 2007, 07:19 PM »
the bear paw opens
each print spreads like a season
there are more than four




(what I had in mind was Haiku about touching nature,
something to do with fingerprints, the hands, leaving your prints
on something, or something to do with touch)

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #1 on: November 16, 2007, 05:22 AM »
yellow biddy down
soft as dandelion's fluff
imperceptible

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #2 on: November 16, 2007, 08:22 AM »
imperceptible
your hands are like the willow
each palm a blessing

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #3 on: November 16, 2007, 11:10 AM »
each palm a blessing
lifelines pressing together
when they meet in prayer

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #4 on: November 18, 2007, 02:05 PM »
when they meet in prayer
skyline and woman
their colors begin to blend


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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #5 on: November 18, 2007, 11:12 PM »
Their colors start to blend;
Fall is fingerpainting
The tree-lined lane's leaves.

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #6 on: November 19, 2007, 06:23 AM »
the tree-lined lane's leaves
a cripsy homespun patchwork
crunch under my boots

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #7 on: November 19, 2007, 08:43 AM »
crunch under my boots
over the seeds from your touch
that will grow again

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #8 on: November 25, 2007, 07:25 PM »
"That will grow again,"
Words that gardeners whisper,
Patting soil o'er seeds.

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #9 on: November 25, 2007, 07:29 PM »
Patting soil o'er seeds
the grayness of tomorrow
suddenly turns blue

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #10 on: September 03, 2008, 10:44 PM »
suddenly turns blue
bright, direct sunlight streams down
tomato caressed

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #11 on: September 03, 2008, 11:21 PM »
tomato caressed
glad to be off the vine
plump inside your hand






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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #12 on: September 04, 2008, 12:23 AM »
plump inside your hand
earthworms wriggle for freedom
ache for soil's return
I believe in making the world safe for our children, but not for our children's children, because I don't think children should be having sex.

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Re: Touch Me Haiku Tag
« Reply #13 on: September 04, 2008, 05:16 AM »
Glory be! Where did this come from? I had slap forgotten about it! Thanks, Gaer, for relocating it for us!

ache for soil's return
soft ground beneath my feet
fertile aroma