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Offline Voodoo Child

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Re: A Sentimental Sod
« Reply #14 on: November 29, 2007, 09:43 PM »
Your quill has conjured images that pierce the heart!
Well done!

~C
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"A dream you dream alone is only a dream. A dream you dream together is reality." John Lennon

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Re: A Sentimental Sod
« Reply #15 on: January 31, 2008, 04:39 PM »
very well conveyed

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Re: A Sentimental Sod
« Reply #16 on: February 01, 2008, 09:29 PM »
Bringing back to life
the dust trod pome.
The comments strike
with such aplomb.
Chomh sean leis an cheo agus níos sine faoi dhó.

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Re: A Sentimental Sod
« Reply #17 on: February 02, 2008, 11:41 AM »
Merlin,

I too enjoy your sentimental words. Wonderful Read!

Azn1poet...Steve

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Re: A Sentimental Sod
« Reply #18 on: February 09, 2008, 10:41 PM »
Thank you, Steve
for your reprieve.
Glad am I to hear
my lines turn gear.
Chomh sean leis an cheo agus níos sine faoi dhó.

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Re: A Sentimental Sod
« Reply #19 on: February 13, 2008, 10:01 AM »
Hi there,

Nice write, but I really got into the following lines.

No welcome comes
when sunlight gleam.
We’ll no more walk
o’or glen, tor, or stream.

The past finds the future
in this disparate moment.


Wow, after this settled, I found it to be a pretty dark drink as I think of time as a liquid.  You mix it together in a glass as "past finds the future."
 
Thanks for that, cheers!

Troy

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Re: A Sentimental Sod
« Reply #20 on: February 13, 2008, 04:46 PM »
Bowing humbly.
Thank you, Troy.
Too kind.
Chomh sean leis an cheo agus níos sine faoi dhó.