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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #28 on: June 25, 2007, 05:57 AM »
sun creeps through fog
illuminating the murk
awakening

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #29 on: June 25, 2007, 08:39 AM »
Nice One!
The clouds told him their names, in the quiet of the summer afternoon
Charles Simic from "The World Doesn't End"

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #30 on: June 25, 2007, 09:03 PM »
scent of pine
and freedom
music plays
slight imperfections in my personality are NOT to be considered flaws but show that i am handmade and of the highest quality.

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #31 on: June 26, 2007, 04:09 AM »
fire flash and thunder
scowling sky threatens deluge
on rain soaked bushland
A smile warms a cold day.

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #32 on: June 26, 2007, 05:41 AM »
Thanks, frag.


bejeweled hummingbird
on mimosa blossoms pink
sips honeyed nectar

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #33 on: June 30, 2007, 02:44 AM »
pink evening sky
reflecting on dark lake
upside down image
A smile warms a cold day.

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #34 on: July 02, 2007, 06:27 AM »
swirling gnats in sun
throes of conjugation
dragonfly attacks

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #35 on: July 11, 2007, 03:13 AM »
feet pound wet pavement
bus starts to pull out of stop
next bus in two hours
A smile warms a cold day.

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #36 on: September 19, 2007, 12:51 AM »
Not being able
to be with it at all,
jetlag
The clouds told him their names, in the quiet of the summer afternoon
Charles Simic from "The World Doesn't End"

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #37 on: September 21, 2007, 06:56 AM »
Thanks for reminding us about this section. I had forgotten all about it. I do hope that you get over your jet lag.

amber-shrouded trees
squirrel holes pattern pine needles
autumn approaches

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #38 on: September 21, 2007, 07:00 AM »
autmn approaches
time to begin again
a new forever

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #39 on: September 21, 2007, 04:24 PM »
This is a lovely haiku, but this isn't haiku tag. This is where you put a haiku that you have created on your own without tagging. If you want to tag onto another, there are two places--Haiku Tag or Haiku TREE tag, where the poem must be about a tree.

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #40 on: September 22, 2007, 04:23 AM »
fingers tapping keys
screen changing very slowly
frustration showing
A smile warms a cold day.

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #41 on: October 11, 2007, 06:21 AM »
Could you explain to me how this is a haiku?