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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #14 on: June 17, 2007, 12:14 AM »
owl sits on the roof;
weighing possibilities,
....................... way deep in it
The clouds told him their names, in the quiet of the summer afternoon
Charles Simic from "The World Doesn't End"

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #15 on: June 18, 2007, 11:31 AM »
feeling better
out not in
methane
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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #16 on: June 18, 2007, 11:34 PM »
I am not sure I grasp what you are saying in this one steff?
The clouds told him their names, in the quiet of the summer afternoon
Charles Simic from "The World Doesn't End"

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #17 on: June 18, 2007, 11:36 PM »
the waves of clouds
turn crimson at daybreak,
shy beginnings
The clouds told him their names, in the quiet of the summer afternoon
Charles Simic from "The World Doesn't End"

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #18 on: June 19, 2007, 01:42 AM »
calming rumble
whiskers tickle
cat is here
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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #19 on: June 20, 2007, 02:58 AM »
blazing sun-
outside my window
bronze gods walk...
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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #20 on: June 20, 2007, 06:44 PM »
Good one Steff


Hey Sylvie are those construction workers bothering you again? :tongue
The clouds told him their names, in the quiet of the summer afternoon
Charles Simic from "The World Doesn't End"

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #21 on: June 20, 2007, 06:47 PM »
working overtime:
when your monday morning
is now tuesday night?
The clouds told him their names, in the quiet of the summer afternoon
Charles Simic from "The World Doesn't End"

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #22 on: June 21, 2007, 05:14 AM »
Russ is out
Talking to the ladies?
wind ruffled
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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #23 on: June 21, 2007, 10:34 AM »
Obviously, I'm not Johnny-on-the-spot! I missed this new category. These are some superb haiku.
I know what Dry meant by "out not in." hahaha

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #24 on: June 21, 2007, 12:09 PM »
thanks witt. Not worth explaining but i am glad it wasnt wasted  :beatnik
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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #25 on: June 21, 2007, 12:18 PM »
terrapin
excavates
drops heirs

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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #26 on: June 24, 2007, 11:34 AM »
yes but are the ladies talking back
Now get in the kitchen and make me a samwitch :tongue
The clouds told him their names, in the quiet of the summer afternoon
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Re: Haiku Of The Day
« Reply #27 on: June 24, 2007, 11:43 AM »
clear midnight:
starshine sprays
my eyes with dreams
The clouds told him their names, in the quiet of the summer afternoon
Charles Simic from "The World Doesn't End"