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Offline poppy

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palindrome
« on: April 12, 2007, 06:36 PM »
Paper like, dry kisses
promise
diminishing passions
as sadly as
passions diminishing
promise
kisses dry, like paper.

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Re: palindrome
« Reply #1 on: April 12, 2007, 08:47 PM »
poppy-

LOL very clever. Great sec imagery indeed.

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Re: palindrome
« Reply #2 on: May 11, 2007, 10:43 AM »
Please pardon my lack of manners, seraph.  I forgot I'd posted this one here.  Thanks for the clever.

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Re: palindrome
« Reply #3 on: May 11, 2007, 02:49 PM »
Oh how true Poppy,  You know your relationship needs help when kisses are dry as paper because the passion has evidently been lost or perhaps they love, but just don't enjoy the passionate kissing any longer.. lol

Here's a dry kiss for ya.. haha   :cheekiss

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Re: palindrome
« Reply #4 on: June 08, 2007, 07:46 PM »
Thank you for reading and commenting on this.  It's been a long time since I've written a palindrome; I think it's about time to try again.

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Re: palindrome
« Reply #5 on: June 12, 2007, 08:43 AM »
this is a really good one. Can anyone play?
slight imperfections in my personality are NOT to be considered flaws but show that i am handmade and of the highest quality.

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Re: palindrome
« Reply #6 on: June 12, 2007, 10:39 AM »
I hadn't seen this at all. Cool. It took me a minute to catch it, but I like what you did.

Dryad, of course you can play. You can play anywhere you want.

gorilla,
of five hundred pounds,
sits
anywhere;
anywhere
sits
five hundred pounds of
gorilla

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Re: palindrome
« Reply #7 on: June 12, 2007, 11:15 AM »
lol.

better think then
slight imperfections in my personality are NOT to be considered flaws but show that i am handmade and of the highest quality.

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Re: palindrome
« Reply #8 on: June 12, 2007, 11:22 AM »
Splashing

divine as
childhood,

as fingers sticky,
full of prints from
mudpies, treats, kisses

discovering

kisses, treats, mudpies
from prints of full
sticky fingers as

childhood
as divine

splashing.
slight imperfections in my personality are NOT to be considered flaws but show that i am handmade and of the highest quality.

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Re: palindrome
« Reply #9 on: June 12, 2007, 12:53 PM »
Great! I love it!!!